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“________-_________!  ¿Cómo estás ahì? Are you finished with your line?!?”

As your friend said that, you fell on your back on the watery soil. Not really caring about your state.

Why did you? Simple, too tired. And it was not some time of the night, it was 7 o’clock in the morning.
How did you manage to end like this? Lack of sleep? Oh, no no. That night you slept soundly.
It was simply fault of that friend of yours, that cheery, life-is-beautiful, the-sun-is-high, tomato-lover Antonio.

All the junctures of your body were terribly screaming in pain, for standing up too much in one shot. Bringing a hand in your hair, you removed them from your face as the almost burning sun caressed your skin, and the sweat that covered your body.

Picking up tomatoes surely was funny, when you were with him. But hey, after some kilometers the body needs to rest! You were even wondering HOW he managed to do all of this all the mornings.

You closed your eyes, relaxing your face and taking a good breath. Well, he was used to this.

…after all he had that body….
…and under the swimsuit…
e-eh. Ahum.

Pushing away that (perverted) thought from your mind, you moaned a bit trying to take away that pain in your muscles.

“D-id she faint…?”

It was Antonio’s voice.

Lifting a little your eyelid, you saw Spain’s figure standing next to you. He was covered with sweat too, but unlike you he seemed like was used to this. His breath was normal, he had a little worried face.

“I’m ok…”

That came out a mumble, you were sure. Maybe he didn’t even hear you.
Closing your eyes again, you relaxed under the Spanish hot sun. It was like being on the beach.

Suddenly, a pair of arms sat you up and started to massage your back. You let out slow moans, as those hands massaged you right on the most sore muscles.

“Is that better, chica?”

All you could do was whisper a little “Yes…”, and once he was finished you finally opened your eyes.

He stood up, your back was a little cold without his touch.
You hugged your knees and placed your chin on them, closing your eyes. He was oddly calm, somehow.

“Mi tomate?”
“You have them all around here…”

How could he question about “his tomatoes”? You’re in a friggin’ TOMATO FIELD.

“I didn’t mean one of those tomatoes. I was calling you, you’re all red!”

You blushed even more, realizing that only his touch made you shiver in pleasure and blush so much to notice.
He kneeled in front of you, while you started (don’t know why) to act practically tsundere.

“W-What? B-But I, I mean, I don’t blush so easily! No no! I-I just- it’s hot today isn’t it?!? That’s why I seem to blush!!!A-And since when I-I am yours?”

In fact, it’s not like you really minded, being his. To say it all, you’d love to. (Admit it. ADMIT.)

You were now with legs crossed, arms crossed over your chest, a small and delicate pout on your mouth.
He seductively placed his hands on the ground on either side of you and leaned forward.

“But I wish you were, chica…”

You blushed even more, and moved your hands behind you trying to balance yourself and not falling behind.

“W-What do you mean…”
You chuckled a bit, could it mean…?

For your answer, he leaned more and placed his sweaty lips on yours. You jumped in surprise and made a little “Mmm!” that suddenly turned in a moan, to his happiness.

After some seconds he started to lick your lower lips, almost eagerly, you happily let him explore your mouth with his mastery.

Breaking the kiss, after a while, he whispered towards your lips:
“You’re mi tomate now…”
Did I get right on the Spanish part?
Just trying to figure out what I do know of Spanish. I see a lot XD

Ah, I forgot to write "Mi amor!" Whatever.

Please ENJOY!

Hetalia belongs to Himaruya
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PrettyQueenGiggles Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Like damn...
I feel so...
so..
soooo....
SOOOOOOOO...
TOMATOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!Romano emote :tomato love: Spain emote ROMANO.... Grell emote Apple Juggle Not a Tomato Appropriation Don't cry tomatoes Tomato Love Om Nom Nom Tomatoe emote - Cheeseburger-mote - Romano (Mad while holding a tomato) [V4] Buono Tomato Boogwomp Hey, look Emoji Set: Explode Italawl Badger Bouncing KILLERTOMATO :killertomato: Whoa Emoticon Eye Bulge Revamp Cherry La Plz Hotdog Tongue Tomato Christmas Request - Pizza glomp Very Shocked Emote For DAW27 Tomat Intensifies Veggie Highfive food gif food gif Shake Chicken Tomatoe Love Avatar Tomato Icon 
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iloveart224 Featured By Owner Edited May 28, 2015
I had the weirdest face when I read the name of the story 
pit was something like this O3O
 I'm not his he is MINE
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hetaliaizmal1fe Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
hehehehehe
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Eliana89364057 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
I don't get tired THAT easily, I work in a rice field a sugarcane field AND a taro field on top of having to help out with the fruits and vegetable garden at home. When people act tired after about five minutes of digging or picking stuff I'm like 'wtf already?'
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Well, not anyone is like you. This fanfiction just wasn't suited for your lifestyle.
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foxylover1223 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
:iconmassiveblushplz:
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I know right? Thanks for reading! ^^
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Haru-no-Jikan-Kage Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
DAMN IT ANTONIO!! I'm already breathless from working in the heat and you do that?! Stupid sexy spaniard... >///< Oh wells~ I love this OMG!
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! And he can't help it, he's hot by nature! XD
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MeepandNeapftw Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
this is by far one of the best fan fictions for spain that I have read so far
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you so much! Glad you think so!
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rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Artist
YAY IM TONI'S TOMATO1 0/////0
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
HE HAS CHOSEN YA
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rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Student Artist
YES! 
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absolcherries Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
yhuutdvdyty omgggg i love this storyyyyy ive been reading fanfictions all night and this is one of my favorites X3
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Gosh, I'm happy I have enlighten your night so much XDD Thank you!
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PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this story so much!
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! ^^
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queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
You made me into a tomato :iconmotherofplz:
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wait let me call Spain to come and get you then
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:iconqueencreeper13:
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Hmmmm....
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AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
BEST. SAPIN. X. READER. EVER. 

FRIGGIN TOMATO FIELD XD
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sunflower246135 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Sapin is a kind of conifer in french XD (it's fir in english i think)
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH QuQ
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:iconhetaliayaoi101:
HetaliaYaoi101 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Student Writer
I have absolutely no objections
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can sense that >wo
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treiannecalne Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Artist
Marluxia Faint  oh gahd
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TheFlightlessAngel13 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MARLUXIA WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU!!!!!
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
>u< Thank ya!
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Hee hee~ Yes, Antonio of course I'll be your tomato! *That gorgeous Spanish ass is mine~*
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nevertheless, look at your username XD
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
*Blushes* W-well someone has to keep an eye on that tomato idiot!
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:iconpointless-drawergirl:
You made my day! XD

But now my gut hurts >.<
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Glad I made you laugh but sorry for your gut! XD
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ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
*Fangrils* Heart  KAWAIII~~ *Dies of cuteness overload*
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OWOWOW

SOMEONE, GIVE ME SOME TOMATOES

Thank you >u<
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ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
*Gives Tomatoes* your welcome
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NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student General Artist
That story.....I think I've fainted. Heart 
That picture....I think I've fainted.  Heart 
and it`s hot outside too today here I think I've fainted.
*dies* I need a rescue Megaphone 
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AAAAAH-

Shall I send Spain to the rescue? c:
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NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Wouldn`t it be a bit risky? :blush: Or it would be like fighting fire with fire? :o (Eek) *crawles under the tomato leaves* (damn that imagination of mineSweating a little... )
I have a dilemma: if i like Canada and Spain is that mean i`m bipolar, or something?
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MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No risks, dear =w= BUT some problems with his "hotness" XDD

What? Noooo, dear, don't worry! The dilemma could be if you liked 2P!CANADA and Spain at the same time. That'd be a dilemma. Yes. 
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Chemical-Dreams Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student General Artist
instead of asking for a lemon...... we ask for a tomatoe
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MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty much MAKES SENSE AYE XD
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Chemical-Dreams Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
yup
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lunaflyaway Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
*sees picture and starts fanning herself*
Is it hot in here, or is it just Spain? XD
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MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think

that's why we call him "caliente" *moonwalks away*
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lunaflyaway Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Probably XD
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Quathra Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
ERMAGERSH I loved it!!! *fangirls all ova da place* btw, niņa is kinda used for younger girls. So as much as he said 'girl', he coulda said 'little girl' or 'squirt'. I think it's fine the way it is, but if you want, you could change it to 'chica'. :3
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MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wasn't Spain a pedo anyways //shot do many times

No, no, Ok, I'll change it ;w; Sorry, I'm not that much of a Spanish-speaker so yeah ;w;
Thank you! >3<
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Japan343 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Cute story!! And then... I remember the time I ate a raw tomato and was imagining of what taste it would be, I took a bite from it and chewed.... IT TASTE TERRIBLE!! How could Romano likes eating raw ones!? I prefer tomato sauce on pizza, thank you very much!!

But I love the story very much! You deserve a hug!! :iconletmehugyouplz: and a tomato (if you like xD)!! :icontomatoplz
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