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“________-_________!  ¿Cómo estás ahì? Are you finished with your line?!?”

As your friend said that, you fell on your back on the watery soil. Not really caring about your state.

Why did you? Simple, too tired. And it was not some time of the night, it was 7 o’clock in the morning.
How did you manage to end like this? Lack of sleep? Oh, no no. That night you slept soundly.
It was simply fault of that friend of yours, that cheery, life-is-beautiful, the-sun-is-high, tomato-lover Antonio.

All the junctures of your body were terribly screaming in pain, for standing up too much in one shot. Bringing a hand in your hair, you removed them from your face as the almost burning sun caressed your skin, and the sweat that covered your body.

Picking up tomatoes surely was funny, when you were with him. But hey, after some kilometers the body needs to rest! You were even wondering HOW he managed to do all of this all the mornings.

You closed your eyes, relaxing your face and taking a good breath. Well, he was used to this.

…after all he had that body….
…and under the swimsuit…
e-eh. Ahum.

Pushing away that (perverted) thought from your mind, you moaned a bit trying to take away that pain in your muscles.

“D-id she faint…?”

It was Antonio’s voice.

Lifting a little your eyelid, you saw Spain’s figure standing next to you. He was covered with sweat too, but unlike you he seemed like was used to this. His breath was normal, he had a little worried face.

“I’m ok…”

That came out a mumble, you were sure. Maybe he didn’t even hear you.
Closing your eyes again, you relaxed under the Spanish hot sun. It was like being on the beach.

Suddenly, a pair of arms sat you up and started to massage your back. You let out slow moans, as those hands massaged you right on the most sore muscles.

“Is that better, chica?”

All you could do was whisper a little “Yes…”, and once he was finished you finally opened your eyes.

He stood up, your back was a little cold without his touch.
You hugged your knees and placed your chin on them, closing your eyes. He was oddly calm, somehow.

“Mi tomate?”
“You have them all around here…”

How could he question about “his tomatoes”? You’re in a friggin’ TOMATO FIELD.

“I didn’t mean one of those tomatoes. I was calling you, you’re all red!”

You blushed even more, realizing that only his touch made you shiver in pleasure and blush so much to notice.
He kneeled in front of you, while you started (don’t know why) to act practically tsundere.

“W-What? B-But I, I mean, I don’t blush so easily! No no! I-I just- it’s hot today isn’t it?!? That’s why I seem to blush!!!A-And since when I-I am yours?”

In fact, it’s not like you really minded, being his. To say it all, you’d love to. (Admit it. ADMIT.)

You were now with legs crossed, arms crossed over your chest, a small and delicate pout on your mouth.
He seductively placed his hands on the ground on either side of you and leaned forward.

“But I wish you were, chica…”

You blushed even more, and moved your hands behind you trying to balance yourself and not falling behind.

“W-What do you mean…”
You chuckled a bit, could it mean…?

For your answer, he leaned more and placed his sweaty lips on yours. You jumped in surprise and made a little “Mmm!” that suddenly turned in a moan, to his happiness.

After some seconds he started to lick your lower lips, almost eagerly, you happily let him explore your mouth with his mastery.

Breaking the kiss, after a while, he whispered towards your lips:
“You’re mi tomate now…”
Did I get right on the Spanish part?
Just trying to figure out what I do know of Spanish. I see a lot XD

Ah, I forgot to write "Mi amor!" Whatever.

Please ENJOY!

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:iconabsolcherries:
absolcherries Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
yhuutdvdyty omgggg i love this storyyyyy ive been reading fanfictions all night and this is one of my favorites X3
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:iconpeaceluvlife:
PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this story so much!
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! ^^
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:iconqueencreeper13:
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
You made me into a tomato :iconmotherofplz:
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wait let me call Spain to come and get you then
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:iconqueencreeper13:
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Hmmmm....
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:iconanimekitty2014:
AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
BEST. SAPIN. X. READER. EVER. 

FRIGGIN TOMATO FIELD XD
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:iconsunflower246135:
sunflower246135 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Sapin is a kind of conifer in french XD (it's fir in english i think)
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH QuQ
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:iconhetaliayaoi101:
HetaliaYaoi101 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Student Writer
I have absolutely no objections
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can sense that >wo
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:icontreiannecalne:
treiannecalne Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Artist
Marluxia Faint  oh gahd
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
>u< Thank ya!
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Hee hee~ Yes, Antonio of course I'll be your tomato! *That gorgeous Spanish ass is mine~*
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nevertheless, look at your username XD
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
*Blushes* W-well someone has to keep an eye on that tomato idiot!
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:iconpointless-drawergirl:
You made my day! XD

But now my gut hurts >.<
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Glad I made you laugh but sorry for your gut! XD
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:iconask-female-red-link:
ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
*Fangrils* Heart  KAWAIII~~ *Dies of cuteness overload*
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OWOWOW

SOMEONE, GIVE ME SOME TOMATOES

Thank you >u<
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ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
*Gives Tomatoes* your welcome
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:iconnaturetune:
NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student General Artist
That story.....I think I've fainted. Heart 
That picture....I think I've fainted.  Heart 
and it`s hot outside too today here I think I've fainted.
*dies* I need a rescue Megaphone 
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AAAAAH-

Shall I send Spain to the rescue? c:
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:iconnaturetune:
NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Wouldn`t it be a bit risky? :blush: Or it would be like fighting fire with fire? :o (Eek) *crawles under the tomato leaves* (damn that imagination of mineSweating a little... )
I have a dilemma: if i like Canada and Spain is that mean i`m bipolar, or something?
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No risks, dear =w= BUT some problems with his "hotness" XDD

What? Noooo, dear, don't worry! The dilemma could be if you liked 2P!CANADA and Spain at the same time. That'd be a dilemma. Yes. 
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:iconchemical-dreams:
Chemical-Dreams Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student General Artist
instead of asking for a lemon...... we ask for a tomatoe
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty much MAKES SENSE AYE XD
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:iconchemical-dreams:
Chemical-Dreams Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
yup
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:iconlunaflyaway:
lunaflyaway Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
*sees picture and starts fanning herself*
Is it hot in here, or is it just Spain? XD
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think

that's why we call him "caliente" *moonwalks away*
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:iconlunaflyaway:
lunaflyaway Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Probably XD
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Quathra Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
ERMAGERSH I loved it!!! *fangirls all ova da place* btw, niņa is kinda used for younger girls. So as much as he said 'girl', he coulda said 'little girl' or 'squirt'. I think it's fine the way it is, but if you want, you could change it to 'chica'. :3
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MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wasn't Spain a pedo anyways //shot do many times

No, no, Ok, I'll change it ;w; Sorry, I'm not that much of a Spanish-speaker so yeah ;w;
Thank you! >3<
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Japan343 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Cute story!! And then... I remember the time I ate a raw tomato and was imagining of what taste it would be, I took a bite from it and chewed.... IT TASTE TERRIBLE!! How could Romano likes eating raw ones!? I prefer tomato sauce on pizza, thank you very much!!

But I love the story very much! You deserve a hug!! :iconletmehugyouplz: and a tomato (if you like xD)!! :icontomatoplz
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WHATWHATWHAT YOU DON'T LIKE RAW TOMATOES
*gasp*

You're talking with a South Italian, babe
You hurt my little heart, hue ;A;

Although I think you would like to eat a raw tomato from Spain's mouth eh? ewe

Thank you, I'll take them both! *hugs and munches on tomato*
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:iconjapan343:
Japan343 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
*GASP* WHAT!?! REALLY I'M VERY SORRY I BROKE YOUR LITTLE HEART I'M GONNA HUG CHU, HUGS CURE EVERYTHING :iconletmehugyouplz: !!!

wut. i'll eat it from romano instead =w= then I'll love it ^^

Your welcome!! *munches pizza*
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AWWWWWW THANK YOU *hugs*

Although... c:

*jumps out from her arms and pushes Romano in the hug*

... =u=
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Japan343 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Romano: O-OI!!

Me: :iconsparklesplz: ROMA-KUN~~ *hugs him tightly~*

Romano: I CAN'T FUCKIN BREATHE!!!

=W= yush...
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:iconjapan343:
Japan343 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
* :icontomatoplz:
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Neko-ScarletSilence Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Freaking tomatoes!!!:) They are beautiful~ROMANO.... Tomato Icon Tomato Love I love this story as much as I love tomatoes!(and that is a lot) Let me hug you! 
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aaaah, thank you >3<
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lyla898989 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Picking tomatoes at 7 in the morning?....if I knew how to, it wouldn't be a problem! :)
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Go to Spain, you shall eventually get used to XD

It wouldn't be a problem because of Spain itself, right? XD
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:iconlyla898989:
lyla898989 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem

I doubt it
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

shareing this now with my spain loving friend...

* fans self* my gosh this was nice

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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Please, do!
And give her a tomato, so she won't scream/squeal while reading XD

Thank you!
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:iconmosdrasthelight:
MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I shall!
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:iconestrellanina:
EstrellaNina Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
That picture....*fan girls*
I hate how Spain loves tomatoes but I despise them
Meh . Oh well
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:iconmyarmor:
MyArmor Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you *bow*

...you despise tomatoes?
Get out of here. *Is South Italian and LOVES tomatoes*

Just kidding, come back here!
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GeekGirl02 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
In fact, it’s not like you really minded, being his. To say it all, you’d love to. (Admit it. ADMIT.)

Nuuuuuu never!!!

On anther note day ass....:icondatassplz:
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